allisonoverall these look very good. I think by picking a brand with a very clear design language, you simplify the task for yourself and it is easier to convey the shape language. I think that where you are at with it so far is very solid. at this point you would need to start refining the details to match the brand. with designs this simple, much of the language is conveyed in the part breakups and materials. we can work on that next week.