i feel like you are understanding the aesthetic details of your brand really well. the detaisl feel correct. what feels slightly off to me is the proportional break down. if you look at the flashlights they are mostly broken down into a 1/3 -2/3 proportion. If you massage the overall shapes to fit this more I think you can nail it. Again, the details are there, just arrange the, in a way that is less overall even. Look at examples of the golden section if i am unclear.
my favorites so far are:
page 3, large sketch in middle left. Just make sure to get a more one third/two thirds overall proportion:
enrique
ReplyDeletei feel like you are understanding the aesthetic details of your brand really well. the detaisl feel correct. what feels slightly off to me is the proportional break down. if you look at the flashlights they are mostly broken down into a 1/3 -2/3 proportion. If you massage the overall shapes to fit this more I think you can nail it. Again, the details are there, just arrange the, in a way that is less overall even. Look at examples of the golden section if i am unclear.
my favorites so far are:
page 3, large sketch in middle left. Just make sure to get a more one third/two thirds overall proportion:
page 10, bottom row, sketch 2.