andrew,i think this is one of the most original things ive seen! really fun. your explorations, analysis and story pages are a fantstic way to explain to your viewers/client what your idea entails and what its influences are. excellent. I think it is a very unique aesthetic you are developing as well, and your page 9 of sketches is great. to me, the last 6 sketches are proportionally really hitting it. pick any one you like to explore.